Friday, December 28, 2012

Alice and the bus

I just finished up the third chapter of Alice. This chapter is in part establishing certain key aspects of the nature of Alice. In the next few posts you will start to see more aspects of herself and it will be somewhat slow for a few chapters but they will drive the story forward. I now would like to get people's perspectives about what all of you think Alice is. I'll only reveal that I have shown in parts what her parents are and they might not be human. So here is Alice on the bus.





"Stop I'm here I'm here," Alice shouted at the bus because it was starting to leave. She saw it still moving away from her and she roared stop and it appeared to slow down and she ran in full force towards the bus. She finally got to it and knocked on the door.
The bus driver saw her and decided to stop and open up for her. Alice was swearing under her breathe when she got on the bus but she politely said thank you to the bus driver. As she was walking down the rows to her typical seat, she got several different looks from her fellow schoolmates.
Every boy on the bus immediately turned and started to say hi, why don't you sit next to me, and other such things. The girls on the other hand gave her venomous looks especially those who have boyfriends. Alice was impervious to this and just walked down to her normal seat.
"Hey, Al did ya do the homework for physics," said a boy that had long dreadlocks wearing a black suit that didn't go with his pasty white complexion.
"John, you aren't even passing basic science and are no where near basic physics and I'm in 3rd year physics but yes I did all of my homework on Friday. By the way that suit is nice how come you're wearing it."
"Thanks, Just felt like dressing up. On a side note what did you bring for lunch are you still in that whole bento Japanese phase or are ya packing like the "normal" kids i.e. sack or cashola."
Alice wasn't sure if she packed her bento box in her backpack so she opened it up and saw that she forgot it. She started to think about why she didn't pick it up when she passed the kitchen like she normally does. This resulted in her remember that she fell asleep early and didnt make her lunch for today.
"Ah shiitake mushrooms I forgot to make my bento. I didn't have anything for breakfast either and even though I feel full I doubt that will stay until 1. As a weird segue I had a really weird dream last night. Want to hear about it?"
"Sure, you know I like weird segues."
Alice went into her entire dream about how she went to a club named Lust. She was on the dance floor when she saw this guy and felt his attraction to her and wandered over to him. She knew that he was staring at her and at some point he lost her but she ended up right next to him. She ordered a red wine and talked about some things like work, current events and such as they left the club and went to diner. She walked him home after eating a big meal that she felt did nothing to get rid of a hunger that was building in her. Outside his apartment they kissed and she felt instantly better. Her hunger was gone she said and she hailed a cab. She then woke up as she felt something happening to her body in the dream.
"Wow, interesting segue about the food tied to the fact that you feel full right now but awesome story. Hard to believe that you'd give up a kiss on the first date. The last time I tried to kiss you on the cheek you punched me straight into a wall with one punch!"
"Hey, that isn't a fair and you know that you were only like two inches from the wall."
"So did Al finally take the chastity belt on her entire body finally," a person walking down the hall toward the seat next to John.
"Nope, Jo she is still has lips as virginal and pure as the driven snow unless if you count her dream last night the she gave up and planted one on a first date of sorts."
Alice started to squirm in her seat now that Jo was sitting in her usual seat. Alice didn't realize or fully know why but Jo seemed to have some hold over her. Jo on the other hand was aware of the thing and some what used it. She could get Alice to do anything unless it went against her code.
The only idea that Alice could come up for this effect with is that in some part of her she was in love or lust with Jo but she liked guys even though she was afraid of intimacy. The other ideas he came up with by and large focused on things from mass media like super powers, radioactive, and super pheromones. She figured it was most likely love or lust because Jo was the first open lesbian in their whole town and admired that she was open about her experiences even though the very thought of kissing was terrifying to Alice.
"Al why don't you tell Jo about your dream. Get her perspective on it." Alice told her dream once again but this time to both of them and when she was finished she thought thy picked up the last kid.
"You sounded like you were some kind of predatory creature. Do you remember anything about the kiss?"
Alice was startled by what Jo said but as she thought about it it actually made some sense. Alice tried to remember anything about the kiss but the feeling of the energy coursing through was block almost everything else out. She know felt like it was actually happening there on the bus and it was like she could feel every guys feelings of lust toward her. She took a breathe in and felt the same ways as in the kiss but it was greatly diminished in comparison. Once se was through going through the dream she exhaled and all the guys let out a shiver.
"Sorry, I only remember the feeling which felt similar to something just now but stronger. John are you okay you look a little pale?"
"What, ya ya I'm fine I just feel like a whole lot of energy was just sapped from me. I'm fine now, so what do you mean it felt similar to something just now?"
"Well while I was think about it that hunger felt a little real and it felt like I could feel every guy's lust or energy. So I inhaled and it felt like I was inhaling it. It was just not as strong as the kiss then I exhaled and it was gone."
"That's creepy, so what did you do over the weekend," Jo responded and they quickly changed subjects.
Though Alice was joining in on the remaining discussion she still was a little preoccupied with the kiss from her dream and the similar effect she had there on the bus. She started breathing during this time and noticed a faint amount of the lust or energy coming through. She could still feel the effect when they got to the school and started to walk out the bus.

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